Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Critique Me (Lawler)
Here is an image I composited from a picture during a model shoot and a picture from Pompeii (from my Italy trip). I also added a smoke image I took in the studio and edited for color and high contrast.

Let me know what you think!
"volatile"
2009


13 comments:

  1. I don't like the part next to her feet but the flow is crazy

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  2. I love the smoke but the area behind the wall shes leaning on looks weird and out of place. Its too open.

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  3. this pictures amazing, love the smoke coming off her dress.

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  4. I like how the whole picture has a red tint, instead of being black and white with a splash of color. But the area behind her looks like it's in a different perspective!

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  5. i like the way the red of the dress dissolves into the smoke.
    i do not like how the feet are lost in the picture

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  6. I love this picture. i feel it could be cropped better, but still its a great picture. the red is awesome

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  7. I really like the smoke. I like how she is on the stone wall but i don't really like the background to the left. Its a really good picture lawls

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  8. I like this photo but whats the background? it doesnt see mto fit.

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  9. That is very cool...its almost as if she is underwater and the dye is coming off of the dress.

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  10. i like the flow but dont know what is happening

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  11. I really really like this! i mostly like how its all black and white with the pop of red. Im also really digging the smoke!

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  12. i didn't know you liked to shoot ads for HBO shows in your free time

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  13. The left side of the photo just seems weird, lie the smokeyness of it is cool, but there's like random brinks and it almost looks like a garage door or something.

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